2009年11月26日木曜日

Many teachers assign homework to students every day....

Write your opinion about the topic below.

Topic: Many teachers assign
homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is
necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support
your answer.


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 I think that daily homework is necessary for students. Since one years ago, I have been learning English through Skype and I do homework almost everyday. Then, I know that it really improves my English skills. Based on my experiences, I guess homework is really important for students.

 First is regarding review. Actually, most of the people can't memorize what they have learned only once so I believe that homework is really important to memorize them. Of course, I review what I learn and it's really important part of learning English for me.

 Second is regarding custom. About one years ago, I used to learn business skill, coaching and I got many homework. Through this classes, I got the custom of learning by myself and even now I study English spontaneously.

 Third is regarding thinking by myself. Actually, through doing my homework, I can get great opportunity of thinking, solving problems by myself. I believe that thinking and solving problems by myself is one of the most important skills to live and I think doing homework brought me the excellent skill.

 Through doing homework by myself, I can make great relationship with my English teachers because they always acknowledge my efforts. Then, I determined to keep doing homework and master English with my great English teachers.

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2009年11月25日水曜日

People work because they need money to live. What are some other

Write your opinion about the topic below.

Topic: People work because
they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work?
Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details
to support your answer.


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 Actually, I used to work for our family company and it hires some pert-time jobs. Until this July, I had been working for the company and I could get many experiences. Based on them, I think there are some important reasons for working. Here are some specific examples of them.

 First is regarding contribution. Usually, working improve our society and it really stimulate our economy. Even now, I'm proud of my previous job because I could work for ensuring employment.

 Second is regarding feeling of accomplishment. Actually, I had to tackle many challenging tasks and it always brought me a feeling of accomplishment. At that time, I felt really happy and I determined to improve my business skills.

 Third is regarding experiences. Actually, I had many difficult tasks but I could manage it thanks to my co-workers help. For me, it's really good experiences and it broadened my outlook a lot. In addition to that, I could learn the importance of helping each other.

 For me, there reasons for working are really important. And I think that older workers should teach those precious things to younger workers and it would improve our working environments and our society.

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 Actually, I used to work for our family company and it hires for some part-time jobs. Until this July, I had been working for the company and I could get many experiences. Based on them, I think there are some important reasons for working. Here are some specific examples of them.


 First is regarding contribution. Usually, working improves our society and it really stimulates our economy. Even now, I'm proud of my previous job because I could work for ensuring employment.

 Second is regarding the feeling of accomplishment. Actually, I had to tackle many challenging tasks and they always brought me a feeling of accomplishment. At that time, I felt really happy and I was determined to improve my business skills.

 Third is regarding experiences. Actually, I had many difficult tasks but I could manage them thanks to my co-workers help. For me, they're really good experiences and they broadened my outlook a lot. In addition to that, I could learn the importance of helping each other.

 For me, these reasons for working are really important. And I think that older workers should teach those precious things to younger workers and it would improve our working environment as well as our society.

2009年11月24日火曜日

Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people...

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Topic: Some
people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel
alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to
support your choice.


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 I prefer to travel with a companion. When I was a university student, I went on a trip with my friends and I usually travel by myself. Based on my experience, Traveling with a friend is happier than traveling by myself.

 First is regarding sharing good things. When I went to Asian countries with my friends, I had many great experiences and I felt really happy about sharing them with my friends. That experience really broadened my outlook and gave us good relationship.

 Second is regarding helping each other. When I went to India, I suffered from food poisoning and I had really tough time. If I visited India with my friend, he/she would help me and I could recover soon.

 Of course, traveling by myself has some benefits. When I travel alone, I don't need to care someone's opinion and I enjoy freedom. Even though, traveling with a companion is more attractive for me.

 These reasons I mentioned above, traveling with a companion is better than traveling by myself. At next trip, I'm going to ask some friends to come with me and I believe that we could have great memories.

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2009年11月21日土曜日

What is a very important skill a person should learn...

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Topic: What is a very
important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the
world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to
support your choice.


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 I think that the most important skill a person should learn is English proficiency. Actually, I have been learning English seriously more than two years and it's changing my life a lot. Based on my experience, English proficiency is the most valuable skill and here are some specific reasons.

 First is regarding broadening someone's outlook. When I was a high school student, I enjoyed homestay and it really broadened my outlook. Actually, learning English is one of the best way to know other cultures and it would bring many experience for us.

 Second is regarding business. Actually, English is the most common language in the world and English proficiency is really important to sell products in the world. Mastering English would increase your business chance and it would bring you success.

 Third is regarding benefits for travel. If you can speak English, you can go wherever you want because English is one of the most common language in the world. Actually, traveling is great experience for you and it's not only fun but also good opportunity to take a larger view.

 These reasons I mentioned above, I believe that English proficiency is most important skill for us. Nowadays, we are in the era of globalization and it would be expedited. So the importance of English proficiency would be larger than before.

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2009年11月18日水曜日

With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more inf

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Topic: Do you agree or
disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology,
students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


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 I agree with this opinion. About two years ago, I have been studying English seriously and I can get many benefits thanks to the new technologies such as Skype and Podcasting. Based on my experience, I believe that students can learn more information and learn it more quickly.

 First is regarding the Skype. Actually, I get English conversation lessons almost everyday thanks to the new communication software called Skype and it's really helpful for me to improve my English skills. Of course, I don't need to go to English conversation schools so I can save money and time so I can get more lessons.

 Second is regarding the Podcasting. Have you ever heard the Podcasting system?  The Podcasting is a kind of Internet radio system and I can install latest Podcast programs into my iPhone or I-pod through this system. So I can get many English information and it really improve my English  skills. If I can't use this system, I should buy more English CD to study it.

 Of course, attending school is a best way of learning something but it's a little difficult for busy people or who doesn't live near the school. And learning something with the new technology such as the Internet could save more money and time.

 In Japan, the number of PC users is getting bigger and more than half of the people have their own PC. So I believe that learning with the new technology is more common and many people use it to improve their life.

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2009年11月10日火曜日

Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain w

Write your opinion about the topic below.

Topic: Choose one of the
following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has
changed people’s lives.• automobiles• bicycles• airplanes Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.


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 I think that automobiles have changed people's lives a lot and it was biggest changes among them. Actually, I use a car almost everyday for commute and I usually drive a car at work. Based on my experience, I guess the advancement of car was biggest impact among them.

 First is regarding contribution. Thanks to the cars and tracks, we can sent heavy things easily and it expedited the speed of industrialization in my country. Of course, our company sent and get many products through the contribution of them.

 Second is regarding commute. Actually, there are many people who commute by car in my town and I guess that long work trip by cars changed our way of working. If we can't use cars for commute, we would not be able to come together at office of factory to work efficiently.

 Of course, airplanes changed our lifestyle a lot. But compared to cars, the impact is not bigger because using car is more common for us than using airplane.

 Actually, we should change the way of using cars because we have better prevent the global warming. Even though, cars can be most useful vehicle for us and the importance of them would be bigger owing to eco-friendly cars.


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2009年11月6日金曜日

Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives....

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Topic: Businesses should hire
employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


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 I don't agree with this opinion. I always know about bad economy through media because Japan is in recession. Through the knowledge I get, I think it's really difficult that business can hire employees for their entire lives. And here are some special reasons for that.

 First is regarding products' life span. Owing to the advancement of new technology, products' life span is getting shorter. For example, In America, one of the most biggest CD stores called Tower Record went bankrupt even many people loved buying CD at the stores about 10 years go. I think it's the example of the difficulty of employment for life.

 Second is regarding moral of employees. Actually, employment for life was common in Japan about 15 years ago and I guess the situation would decrease employees' moral and competitive power in the international markets. So I think employment for life could reduce Japanese productivity.

 Of course, you would think that stable condition of employees in one company for long is really helpful to stabilize employees' mind but I think the careers and abilities that employees can get through career changes would also stabilize their mind.

 Through this recession, many people start to think their career plan to get stable life style and I guess that the number of career changes would increase after this strict situation. And I think it would improve Japanese competitive power in the international markets.

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