2009年10月20日火曜日

It has recently been announced that a large shopping...

Write your opinion about the topic below.

Topic: It has recently been
announced that a large shopping center may be built in your
neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific
reasons and details to support your answer.


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 I don't support this plan. In our hometown, many stores were on the state of bankruptcy, even most of the stores were near local train station. That's the reason why a large shopping center was built and it really attract customers. Actually, I have been watching that situation for long so I'm oppose to building a large shopping center. And here are some specific reasons for that.

 First is regarding special knowledge of shop staff. Most of small stores in our hometown continue more than decades so their staff's knowledge about their goods is excellent. Of course, a large shopping center's staff would learn about their goods but their knowledge would not be able to surpass small shop staff's knowledge.

 Second is regarding color of local town. In Japan, some cities could become really attractive by developing their personality and I think that developing the originality of our hometown would be really helpful to attract many people. And I think that building a large store would disrupt it.

 Of course, usually big shopping centers offer goods at reasonable prices but compared to local small stores, their supports for their goods are not enough after customers buy.

 Not only large shopping centers but also internet shopping websites such as Amazon attract many customers and the sales of local stores are depressed. So we should find good ways to become local stores more attractive.

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 I don't support this plan. In our hometown, many stores were on the state of bankruptcy, even most of the stores near local train station. That was the reason why a large shopping center was built before and it really attracts customers. Actually, I have been watching that situation for long so I'm opposing to building a new large shopping center. And here are some specific reasons for that.

 First is regarding special knowledge of shop staff. Most of small stores in our hometown continue more than decades so their staff's knowledge about their goods is excellent. Of course, a large shopping center's staff would learn about their goods but their knowledge would not be able to surpass the small shop staff's knowledge.

Second is regarding color of local town. In Japan, some cities could become really attractive by developing the city's personality and I think that developing unique features of our hometown would be really helpful to attract many people. And I think that building a large store would disrupt it.

 Of course, usually big shopping centers offer goods at reasonable prices but compared to local small stores, their support for their goods is not enough after customers buy their products.

 Not only large shopping centers but also internet shopping websites such as Amazon attract many customers and the sales of local stores are depressed by this. So we should find better ways for local stores to be more attractive rather than building large shopping center.

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