How do movies or television influence ....

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Topic: How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use
reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

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 I think that biggest influence of movies or television is fashion especially body shape. Actually, there are many people who are influenced by television or movies in Japan and I think this trend is not suitable because it bring us many problem. Here are some examples of how to be influenced.

 First is regarding Japanese movies. There are many slim actors and actresses in the screen and they are admired by many people. So many people try to become more slimmer even though it is not healthy. Thus,we should find new good example who is not only beauty but also healthy in movies.

  Second is regarding television. In Japan, there are many television programs that featured on how to loose weight. These programs always provide new ways of diet and many people follow those ways even though they are not healthy.

 Of course, I want to loose my weight and become more fashionable but excessive diet would cause many health problem. So we should know ideal body figure, not related to commercialism, to keep our body healthy.

 In Japan, television and movies have really great impact so mass media should consider not only commercialism but also people's benefits. If mass media are changed for people, Japanese people would be happier than before.

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 I think that the biggest influence of movies or television is on fashion especially about body figure. Actually, there are many people who are influenced by television or movies in Japan and I think this trend is not suitable because it brings us many problem. Here are some examples on how people are influenced.

 First is regarding Japanese movies.
There are many slim actors and actresses on the screen and they are
admired by many people. So many people try to become more slimmer even
though it is not healthy.

 Second is regarding television. In Japan, there are many television programs that feature how to lose weight. These programs always provide new ways of diet and many people follow them even though they are not healthy.

 Of course, I want to lose my weight and become more fashionable but excessive diet would cause many health problems. So we should know our ideal body figures, not related to commercialism in order to keep our body healthy.

 In Japan, television and movies have really great impact so mass media should consider not only commercialism but also people's benefits. If mass media are changed for the people, Japanese people would be happier than before.